Thriller Storyline (new idea)

After re-thinking our initial idea, we decided to change our storyline. We decided this, as our original idea would be very difficult to shoot. Not only would it be hard to shoot, but it would also be difficult to make it look believable, and well shot. It was also extremly difficult to find realistic actors to play the main parts, as we could not play the parts ourselves, and no body knew of anyone, who fit the character discription. We decided to change our style of thriller too, from film noir, to independant British gangster.

New Storyline:
Tells the story of a teenage girl, who is on the run from a stalker. Who has been following her, and threatening her. The story begins with the girl boarding a train. The camera then cuts to the girls stalker, reaserching and making phone calls into her dissapearance. It then keeps cutting between the two, as a male voice over plays, which is the stalker, speaking eerily about how much he loves her, and "if he cant have her no one can".

Other thriller films that have influenced are idea, are "strangers on a train", and "seven". As we are going to choose shot types from both films. Such as low angle shots of the girls feet walking in the train station, as used in "strangers on a train".